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She the Young Rose Was Set To Bloom

A Poet's Dozen II-First Date Sponsor: Silent One She, The Young Rose Was Set To Bloom young rose set to bloom dawn's light awakens my soul beauty in red shines Her graceful dancing brought on great applause. I was unworthy, bad temper the cause. As her eyes spoke to my sad, longing heart, Crystal palaces shattered within my soul. Angel that once inspired great hope in me, Her singing voice kissed my soul quite divine, In my heart, Heaven then lifted the sea, Spirit said walk away, she is too fine, Decades shall pass, before you find sunshine. Date Written: December 28th, 2015 One modern Haiku: 3 lines: Syllables 5,7,5 A couplet: 2 lines, 10-10 Free verse: 2 lines, 10-10 English Quintain: 5 lines: Rhyming scheme ababb Syllables Per Line:10 10 10 10 10 Total # Syllables:50 4th place....

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Date: 1/12/2016 1:21:00 PM
- There is no beauty without love - Beautifully written your young Rose, Robert - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:41:00 AM
so well done, robert... you weave wonderful poetry.. congrats and hopefully soon, i can write with your muse!..huggs
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Date: 1/11/2016 9:53:00 PM
Very nice!
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Date: 1/11/2016 9:21:00 PM
Congrats on your placement Robert!! :) *Smiles*
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