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SHE THAT WILL COME (2)

The sky will lower, the hills quieten, and the moonlight to my window sill come, the night she will come.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/20/2009 6:39:00 AM
Very impressive write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 10/12/2009 9:11:00 PM
Fantastic imagery,very nicely written.The moon will give you enough light .Good luck. Best wishes Chacko
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Date: 9/12/2009 5:15:00 AM
wow this goes to my favs..indeed a gem--Charma
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Date: 9/11/2009 4:23:00 AM
in the night she will come as sunrise to your dark,you re agood writer-Celina
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Date: 9/2/2009 4:26:00 PM
Nicely descriptive. Sara
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Date: 9/2/2009 3:42:00 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/2/2009 3:31:00 PM
Sweet dusk, is a surety
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Date: 9/2/2009 3:14:00 PM
Lovely haiku KK
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