She Takes My Breath Away

I'm falling into a sensual place, 
with the most alluring look on my face. 

What tender, powerful feelings enthrall, 
while immersed in passion I have it all.  

Dark mirrors of the soul whisper soft things. 
Warm fantasies fly as hearts dance and sing. 

Fingertips contour ev'ry wanton zone, 
placing two lovers atop passion’s throne. 

Their bodies’ mesh, like oiled serpents entwine; 
melting into this universe sublime. 

Bodies gesture wild, voices moan and sigh; 
raptures erupt as intense pleasures cry. 

Lover's minds languish on Paradise gained; 
blissful impressions are all that remain. 

Filled with the power of love’s magic touch; 
lost in emotions that are craved so much. 

Embracing sweet memories gently made, 
that dance in two souls and never shall fade. 

There’s no better place for my heart to fly, 
than to her caress that sends me so high. 

A glimpse at romance I’m given today; 
what my eyes behold takes my breath away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 3:30 PM
engaging with a perfect rhyme scheme. wishing you well
VanHooser Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 2:08 PM
Thanks Sara, for a change this was a rather easy one to write. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Ron
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 4:41 PM
Hello Ron, Wow ! A passionate poemof love. HYour friend /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 4:12 PM
Hello Ron, Yes I agree there is love in poetry. Yes Ron i enjoyed this poem. Your friend, Darlene/
VanHooser Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 2:10 PM
;-) Thank you Darlene! There is love in poetry no matter the subject, there has to be or we would not have poetry at all. This one bordered on the erotic, but I did not want it to be vulgar, and I think I achieved that. I'm glad you liked it. Ron
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