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not a wisp taller than four foot two sporting mile high stilettos her tossed bleached hair way up high in a loose chignon red dress tails that effortlessly flow dreamily behind her without missing a beat 'excuse me ~' she winks and smiles as she struts on by AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on June 2, 2018 for contest SHE WALKS POETRY sponsored by JULIA WARD

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Date: 6/3/2018 9:44:00 AM
You have described her really beautifully, when someone's height is 4 foot 2 inch, she has to wear heals, otherwise she ll look so small, no matter how difficult it is to walk in them, it sure make your height look a little bigger. Good luck in the contest
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/3/2018 7:11:00 PM
The perspective is a bit better from up higher. You are absolutely right, Faraz. Thanks for your visit and comment.
Date: 6/2/2018 8:43:00 PM
You've painted a lovely picture, Line! Janice
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Date: 6/2/2018 10:39:00 PM
Thanks, Janice.
Date: 6/2/2018 3:20:00 PM
your poetic imagination runs truly wild, Line. Best wishes in the contest!
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Date: 6/2/2018 5:32:00 PM
LOL. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Ralph. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/2/2018 12:28:00 PM
She sounds like a mannequin of beauty and grace. I have enjoyed your jewelette lines. I'm sending you , winning wishes Line
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Date: 6/2/2018 5:33:00 PM
Thanks, Pixie. Most appreciated.

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