Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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She Struts On By

not a wisp taller than four foot two
sporting mile high stilettos
her tossed bleached hair
way up high in a loose chignon
red dress tails that effortlessly
flow dreamily behind her
without missing a beat
'excuse me ~'
she winks and smiles
as she struts on by



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

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Faraz Ajmal June 3, 2018 at 9:44 AM You have described her really beautifully, when someone's height is 4 foot 2 inch, she has to wear heals, otherwise she ll look so small, no matter how difficult it is to walk in them, it sure make your height look a little bigger. Good luck in the contest Line Gauthier June 3, 2018 at 7:11 PM The perspective is a bit better from up higher. You are absolutely right, Faraz. Thanks for your visit and comment.

Janice Canerdy June 2, 2018 at 8:43 PM You've painted a lovely picture, Line! Janice Line Gauthier June 2, 2018 at 10:39 PM Thanks, Janice.

Ralph Sergi June 2, 2018 at 3:20 PM your poetic imagination runs truly wild, Line. Best wishes in the contest! Line Gauthier June 2, 2018 at 5:32 PM LOL. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Ralph. Much appreciated.

Mystic Rose Rose June 2, 2018 at 12:28 PM She sounds like a mannequin of beauty and grace. I have enjoyed your jewelette lines. I'm sending you , winning wishes Line Line Gauthier June 2, 2018 at 5:33 PM Thanks, Pixie. Most appreciated.