She Stopped Being Pretty

she reached for another cigarette
her face falling apart
cracked and parched
her throat scratchy
her children begged her to stop

her anxiety floated away
as her fix was given
she got uglier 
her teeth turned yellow
she stopped being pretty

cancer of the mouth
her tongue was gone
she kept lighting up
her tears never sated
her life over
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 5:08 PM
Wow! Such a sadness.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 6:38 PM
Sure is
Gilmour Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 4:11 PM
a warning for others maybe, though many do struggle with this addiction. Thankfully I have never smoked. Hope all is well dear Caren. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Krutsinger Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 6:39 PM
Smoking is a sad way to destroy your mouth, lungs and bones.
One Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 9:16 AM
Sad, that people do things that can cause illnesses... but then you have some who are never effected by cigarettes, but some are...
Krutsinger Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 6:39 PM
Some become readily addicted.
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