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She Stopped Being Pretty

she reached for another cigarette her face falling apart cracked and parched her throat scratchy her children begged her to stop her anxiety floated away as her fix was given she got uglier her teeth turned yellow she stopped being pretty cancer of the mouth her tongue was gone she kept lighting up her tears never sated her life over

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Date: 11/14/2020 5:08:00 PM
Wow! Such a sadness.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/14/2020 6:38:00 PM
Sure is
Date: 11/14/2020 4:11:00 PM
a warning for others maybe, though many do struggle with this addiction. Thankfully I have never smoked. Hope all is well dear Caren. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/14/2020 6:39:00 PM
Smoking is a sad way to destroy your mouth, lungs and bones.
Date: 11/14/2020 9:16:00 AM
Sad, that people do things that can cause illnesses... but then you have some who are never effected by cigarettes, but some are...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/14/2020 6:39:00 PM
Some become readily addicted.

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