she stood in mine ray
.
whilst mine
fatigue'd filter'd
frame
thuh sun'z rayz
front
thuh picturesque
ocean'z view
az
mine thuh
supine
sand'z warm
gentle
massnage
thuh lidz uv mine eyne
sense'd
black
thuh silhouette
uv hern
naykid self
pluperfect
preening
*massnage; edvard'z lisp for
massage ')
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