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She Still Cries

She
Has pain
No-one sees
Hidden inside
While she lives each day
Giving others
Care and love
She still
Cries


Heidi Sands

10/14/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dutta Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 2:25 PM
Nicely penned in few words.I admire.
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Thank you Anisha :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 7:54 AM
This is so very sad Heidi, so well said with few words, sometimes succinct writes are the most powerful. Reminds me of a song I wrote called When she dreams, very sad but allows you to feel her pain, maybe you would like it!
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 8:02 AM
I will take note to check out your song called When she dreams. I love to see your work John. Thank you for your visit and comments this morning :)
Green Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 7:33 AM
Very sad. We never know what pain and sorrow another may be holding inside. This was amazing Heidi
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 8:01 AM
You are right Chris. We do not know. Thank you for your kind comment :)
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 6:46 AM
Sad but true to life, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 8:01 AM
Yes, many people go through this Vijay. You are right about that. Thank you for your comment on this :)
Gilmour Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 3:33 AM
Dear Heidi, you have the sweetest soul. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 4:47 AM
Thank you for being so kind to me Ann. Have a nice day :)
Mcintosh Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 2:49 AM
So sad, but so true with some instances. God bless you dear lady, With love, Gina
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 3:02 AM
Yes, it can be true in many instances. Thank you for your kind comment this morning Gina :)
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