Chiquitachiamaka Baity Poet Tail-rhyme

She Still Believes

She once swam in seas of belief
                          Now drowning fast in depths of grief
                                    She still believes in love
                            She once soared high in truthful skies
                           Her wings have been clipped by his lies
                                   She will still soar above. 






Chiquita Baity

Sponsor Dr.Ram Mehta 
Tail-Rhyme Contest

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Vince Suzadail Jr. September 27, 2011 at 6:16 PM You never ever give up or you will never soar with the eagles. Good write. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown August 8, 2011 at 4:38 PM Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail-Rhyme" contest Chiquita. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley August 7, 2011 at 10:16 PM So happy you won with this verse. Sad in itself but the end is full of hope.

Kash Poet August 7, 2011 at 10:13 AM Very nice Chiquita...congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 6, 2011 at 1:13 AM Congrats Chiquita on your HM in the contest with this exciting entry ..enjoy special honor luv..

Cyndi Macmillan August 5, 2011 at 9:32 PM WOW! A stunner! :-0 Congrats on your win. This is truly an inspirational piece and deserves a big round of applause! Cheers and smiles from Cyndi.

Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2011 at 9:23 PM Nice one. Congratulations on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 5, 2011 at 5:15 PM Congratulations on the win in my contest, Chiquita

Juanita Warden August 2, 2011 at 2:51 AM True words you have written here, Chiquita...hugs..jo...thanks for comments on my poems..

Joseph Osita August 1, 2011 at 12:04 PM Great work of vivid imageries! I hope this will be a winner.thanks for sharing

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 1, 2011 at 11:35 AM brilliant words Chiquita and good luck in the contest.. an amazing picture in words ...

Dr.Ram Mehta August 1, 2011 at 11:04 AM Thanks for the entry ,Chquita

S.Jagathsimhan Nair August 1, 2011 at 9:46 AM Thank you, Chiquita. This one should make the grade. hopeful vs-a-vis grief..great. good luck..SJ

Jl Sadberry August 1, 2011 at 7:38 AM Smile, *^_^* “First I Wish to Say Unto Your Precious Heart That I Still Love Your Beautiful Name My Dear, Lovely & Priceless Chiquita Baity. = As For This Stirring & Soulful Piece of Your Beauties Heart Brushed Upon The Canvas In Verse == Often For Most In This Place, Shadows Come to Steal Away But, I Find Strength & Resolve Within Your Priceless Reflection; Lovely.” === My Love to You Always & Forever, Jasper *