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She Shuddered At Her Emotions

She shuddered at her emotions For they scared her now more than ever before Released themselves without permission They were prancing around doing God knew what She should have known better than to try Suppressing them had never worked before They came for her tonight In her dreams, showing her their bloody teeth and their violent ways Her little girl self was horrified, for she had forgotten the evilness inside that had not been brought out for a long time The wailing and keening disturbed her neighbors for they had never heard this side The police were called She answered the door wearing her unassuming face Her little girl smile. They asked to come inside. She let them in, hoping her evil emotions would let them live. If they had waited two more minutes she could have hidden them inside a poem. Written 12-06-2020 Contest: Catharsis Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 12/14/2020 9:05:00 AM
A poetry hook! Nice work Caren ! Enjoyed Much TY
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/14/2020 6:40:00 PM
Thank you Paris-Maree
Date: 12/12/2020 6:40:00 AM
Excellent job Caren! Congrats on your win!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/14/2020 6:40:00 PM
Thank you Mark
Date: 12/11/2020 9:29:00 PM
Very powerful Caren. Wonderful imagery and irony - "if they had waited two more mintues/she could have hidden them in a poem." Congratulations on your win!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/14/2020 6:40:00 PM
Thank you Sam
Date: 12/11/2020 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love your last line, "she could have hidden them inside a poem." Yes, we can hide anything in a poem. Enjoy your win with blessings............
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/11/2020 2:32:00 PM
We sure can!
Date: 12/11/2020 2:51:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/11/2020 6:51:00 AM
Thank you my good friend.
Date: 12/10/2020 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2020 2:47:00 PM
Thank you for hosting this contest which gave me the marvelous idea, Silent One.

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