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She Sees Me and Smiles

  
She's gone
She's free
No pain
Restrain
We never knew 
from whence it came
as cruelly it crept 
inside her brain

Watching her slowly fade away
It truly broke my heart
every minute
of every hour
of every single day
this evil disease was taking a hold
unable to walk
unable to talk
so sad to see 
when she did not know me

My dearest Sis
would sometimes return
to brighten up my day
Was it
something I said
Was it
something I read
A song maybe
brings her back to me
What joy to see her smile again
and her sparkling blue eyes
knowing deep down inside
She is there all the while
She sees me and smiles
This disease I truly despise
~~~
Sadly just a week ago
My dearest Sis
‘twas time to go
Now free is she
No pain
Restrain
Her dear sweet soul
soars up above
My tears they flow
'twas her time to go
Sis I want you to know
That I love you so
My sweetest friend
beat Alzheimer’s in the end

Written 24th June 2022 for Deborah


contest    BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE
sponsor   Brian Strand
6th PLACE

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/20/2022 10:08:00 AM

Such a lovely piece in tribute to your dear sister Ann, so sorry to hear of your sisters passing , I really enjoyed your style you used here, a blessing to read indeed. Hope all is well and you've known God's peace during these months. Blessings always,Gordon xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/3/2022 8:56:00 AM

Dear Gordon have only just seen your lovely words and I thank you so much. Deb was in fact my sister in law, but she was like the sister I never had (have 2 brothers) and over these last few years we grew very close. To see her decline at such a young age was devastating - she was in her middle 50's when diagnosed and just 66 when she passed - God rest her soul... with kindest thoughts from Ann xx

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/5/2022 5:50:00 PM

Yaa…you placed in the contest, Congratulations, Ann Panagiota and Irene with a bouquet of red roses for my winning friend. Much love xxx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/9/2022 7:31:00 AM

How lovely dearest friends, and red roses too. with love to you both from Ann xx

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/2/2022 10:37:00 AM

Dearest Ann, What a loss for you. This disease in so ravenous. Hardest on families as you see your loved one disintegrate before your eyes, Your poem captures it well. My sincere condolences,Ann. Fingers crossed for a win in the contest. Panagiota xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/9/2022 7:29:00 AM

Bless you dear Panagiota for your words of comfort. With love Ann xx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/29/2022 11:46:00 PM

Alzheimer’s - or any serious illness, for that matter, reaches human kind to the depths of sufferings. Living with these is the only possible success over these. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/9/2022 7:30:00 AM

Thank you dear Christuraj ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx