She Saw Well Beyond Her Flesh Years

the seeing child 
exotic and special
an old soul

she had a history
unknown to those unenlightened
understood by the others

she saw well beyond her flesh years
the villagers flocked to her
asking for her advice

she was the shaman of their village
at earth age eight
understanding better than most

sharing a soul past
with those who would listen
more often those who were willing to hear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kiser Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 10:00 PM
Children are more wise than we give them credit for being; unlike adults, they can fight one minute and be best friends, the next. Well penned.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 1:34 PM
Children are my "go to" place for everything good.
Hodges Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 9:12 PM
This poetry tells well the story of a Shaman's place in a community. To bad so few are heard now. Lovely write!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 1:34 PM
Thank you Alison.
Rose  Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 8:41 PM
She sounds like a very wise young woman, you portray her beautifully dear Caren. Hope all is well, and in good health, Love xo
Krutsinger Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 1:35 PM
All is well. I am staying away from people for as long as I can.
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