She Rose

From the ashes
What used to be?
Knowing her destiny
Is life to overcome time!

She wasn’t worthy, cannot overcome
Cheats her heart, but never to be
To overcome the obstacles
Life places before her
Each day
Is a life
To
Overcome
Learning who she is
Striving for what she could
Become
Complete
Oneness
With many facets
Of her being
With
Chocolate wine
lot of Memories
And strawberry kisses.

Brooke Dylan 2014

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Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/22/2014 6:20:00 AM

Love this one! Each day is a new beginning, a new chance.

Jeremy Street

Date: 5/19/2014 5:10:00 PM

Smile, just being me baby girl! You know that ? Aside from the inre unto your beauty's com at poe: this, is one of your heart's deeper verses which, we have recently viewed...Many thoughts arise here and amid they the greatest in hopes that, Every life could find joy as happiness while they are here ~ A flip side to another coin although, beautiful Brooke..Should one's eyes behold something Beyound then We become hard pressed to believe, they could Ever settle these dreams too deep here in Babylon ? Yet again, your painting is very beautiful as in touching and, well deserving to find her way unto faves....Love, Jeremy *

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/19/2014 5:16:00 PM

WOW JEREMY.. your comment digs deep. thank you hugs

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 5/19/2014 11:19:00 AM

A very well written poem. Each day is a new day with a different experience. With my illness - I face that everyday. Have blessed day..... Lucilla

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 5/18/2014 8:18:00 PM

Life places before her each day....nice to read.

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/18/2014 8:20:00 PM

thank you so much..nice to see you