She Read Them All

She read them all and did not know
She was the star in every show
I wrote tham all but not tell
For the ridiculous riddle or spell
Had so much meaning like a moon
Playing where tides throb and moan.
To croos the distance of sightlessness
And live in the proximity of her lonelines
Apalled him more
Than his very fear of what is sure.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 2:47 PM
of courseshe reads them all,hope we all do,tese sweet thoughts written here are treasures to behold --bravo--charma
Gumbo Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 9:03 AM
This is a great poem David. Deep my friend. You are read, and your words love. :)
Austin Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 7:11 AM
Find people like Stacey Haislop and Kristin Reynolds...others. They'll read you and love your stuff. Love, daver
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 4:56 AM
David, Fear of reality...and hiding nearby, from it...holding secret love and caring inside....is safe. But????? Nice poem. Reality can be scary sometimes, even for love. You made me think. I enjoy thinking ...a lot! Thanks. And thanks for your welcome coments on my poem. Love, Dane
Docherty Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 4:26 AM
A very thought provoking piece, made me feel sad on first read but then hopeful on the re-read...thanks for your lovely thoughts on my writes, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
Ginn Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 4:18 AM
Ewww I like it, a very ambiguous read. Good job David.
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