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She Read Them All

She read them all and did not know She was the star in every show I wrote tham all but not tell For the ridiculous riddle or spell Had so much meaning like a moon Playing where tides throb and moan. To croos the distance of sightlessness And live in the proximity of her lonelines Apalled him more Than his very fear of what is sure.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/7/2009 2:47:00 PM
of courseshe reads them all,hope we all do,tese sweet thoughts written here are treasures to behold --bravo--charma
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Date: 5/4/2009 9:03:00 AM
This is a great poem David. Deep my friend. You are read, and your words love. :)
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:11:00 AM
Find people like Stacey Haislop and Kristin Reynolds...others. They'll read you and love your stuff. Love, daver
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Date: 5/4/2009 4:56:00 AM
David, Fear of reality...and hiding nearby, from it...holding secret love and caring inside....is safe. But????? Nice poem. Reality can be scary sometimes, even for love. You made me think. I enjoy thinking ...a lot! Thanks. And thanks for your welcome coments on my poem. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/4/2009 4:26:00 AM
A very thought provoking piece, made me feel sad on first read but then hopeful on the re-read...thanks for your lovely thoughts on my writes, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/4/2009 4:18:00 AM
Ewww I like it, a very ambiguous read. Good job David.
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