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She Raven

She looked at me! Her watch in her heart The same old lame looks were re-engineered This time a sorely eerie glance drove my demons, Certainly I wasn't for her or her for me A whispering cloud dropped as a flashy wind tied us apart The anguish of fading hope was gaining strength A tear wasn't enough! Her tormenting sour laughter broke the bounds Probably the maiming rain was her blow Her sordid-self snowed my nostalgic memories From afar I saw a minor mirror crack of her soul I blew the whistle, THE GAME WAS ON!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/24/2024 3:49:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/24/2016 4:12:00 PM
Samuel Enrique , Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2016 10:10:00 PM
Samuel, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:36:00 PM
Wow! This is a great write. I really love the imagery and the personification! Def a 7!
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