She Raven

She looked at me!

Her watch in her heart
The same old lame looks were re-engineered
This time a sorely eerie glance drove my demons,

Certainly I wasn't for her or her for me
A whispering cloud dropped as a flashy wind tied us apart
The anguish of fading hope was gaining strength
A tear wasn't enough!

Her tormenting sour laughter broke the bounds
Probably the maiming rain was her blow
Her sordid-self snowed my nostalgic memories
From afar I saw a minor mirror crack of her soul
I blew the whistle,

THE GAME WAS ON!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 3:49 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 24, 2016 at 4:12 PM
Samuel Enrique , Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 3, 2016 at 10:10 PM
Samuel, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
Hunjeri Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 10:36 PM
Wow! This is a great write. I really love the imagery and the personification! Def a 7!
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