05/05/24
Pick a line and like hooked fish.....
Contest by John Lawless
Shocked, as she questioned my manhood ! I told her, “ My eyes are up here.” Couldn’t understand her attitude . What she really meant, not clear. We loved each other, there’s no doubt displaying all my cards open : How this awkward feelings to sprout, I could never imagine even. I didn't inquired what she had meant ! Couldn't surmised, what went in her mind. I loved her and not to repent. But I had to leave her behind. Failed to analyse her problem, what happened to her to say so. What’s the reason to put me blame ! Couldn’t endure as she hit my ego.. Her feelings not to analyse. My amour not to exhibit. Actually couldn’t realise, how could I prove me perfect fit. Felt helpless, no urge to argue. What to do ? Absolute no way. Introspection offered no clue. No alternative: walked away.
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