She Plucked My Petals

From bud to bloom she watched me grow
In my garden where love for him was first begot
One day she plucked my petals, whispering low,
"Does he love me,         or love me not?"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Daniel Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 3:14 AM
Very nicely painted:)
Allison Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 3:34 PM
... and ... and after she was plucked did he love her or not Marti!:-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 4:01 PM
lol:-) hugs jan xx
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