She Never Made Waves

The spiders were crawling into her eye sockets but she was okay with it 

Like she had been okay with the mouse biting her big toe 

And the cobra hissing loudly into her right ear 

She was okay with everything; not wanting to make waves. 

No! I said. I do not believe it 

But I had not met her 

She had been taught to be compliant 

She was polite to a fault. 

She expected nothing good to happen, 

And she was not disappointed. 

What if you pushed her off a cliff I asked 

Would she scream or go quietly? 

She screamed all the way to the water. 

Too bad she drowned before I could tell her how proud I was.
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Date: 11/7/2019 11:55:00 AM
This... was important. I was captured and thrown with her... I hit the water... and wanted to remember something... but it was not important. Excellent write. Incredible pen. Ann
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/7/2019 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Ann.
Date: 11/7/2019 9:18:00 AM
What an amazing story! What a lesson to learn dear, Caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/7/2019 2:18:00 PM
I think it is something we should all try to be aware of.
Date: 11/7/2019 7:48:00 AM
Wow. Amazing write. Blessings and love to you, Gina
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/7/2019 9:10:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 11/7/2019 5:17:00 AM
She's Free...But a what a price to Pay...especially after being so kind and considerate...this is true to LIFE
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/7/2019 7:26:00 AM
It truly is.
Date: 11/6/2019 10:34:00 PM
Oh wow. This fits one of my best friends so well... Profoundly penned, as usual!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/7/2019 7:26:00 AM
Hello my friend.
Date: 11/6/2019 9:25:00 PM
how sad, Caren, good write.....
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/7/2019 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 11/6/2019 7:30:00 PM
A sad piece with deep meaning, well thought out Caren
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/7/2019 7:27:00 AM
Thank you TS.
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