She Never Made Waves

The spiders were crawling into her eye sockets but she was okay with it 

Like she had been okay with the mouse biting her big toe 

And the cobra hissing loudly into her right ear 

She was okay with everything; not wanting to make waves. 

No! I said. I do not believe it 

But I had not met her 

She had been taught to be compliant 

She was polite to a fault. 

She expected nothing good to happen, 

And she was not disappointed. 

What if you pushed her off a cliff I asked 

Would she scream or go quietly? 

She screamed all the way to the water. 

Too bad she drowned before I could tell her how proud I was.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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November 7, 2019 at 11:55 AM
This... was important. I was captured and thrown with her... I hit the water... and wanted to remember something... but it was not important. Excellent write. Incredible pen. Ann
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November 7, 2019 at 2:18 PM
Thank you Ann.
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November 7, 2019 at 9:18 AM
What an amazing story! What a lesson to learn dear, Caren!
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November 7, 2019 at 2:18 PM
I think it is something we should all try to be aware of.
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November 7, 2019 at 7:48 AM
Wow. Amazing write. Blessings and love to you, Gina
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November 7, 2019 at 9:10 AM
Thank you my friend.
Michael Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 5:17 AM
She's Free...But a what a price to Pay...especially after being so kind and considerate...this is true to LIFE
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November 7, 2019 at 7:26 AM
It truly is.
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November 6, 2019 at 10:34 PM
Oh wow. This fits one of my best friends so well... Profoundly penned, as usual!
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November 7, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Hello my friend.
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November 6, 2019 at 9:25 PM
how sad, Caren, good write.....
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November 7, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Thank you Eve.
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November 6, 2019 at 7:30 PM
A sad piece with deep meaning, well thought out Caren
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November 7, 2019 at 7:27 AM
Thank you TS.
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