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She Loves the Mall

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She Loves the Mall

She loves the mall
It suits her to a tee
It's the only place
 she wants to be

First she goes to the restroom
to make sure that she is neat
Next she goes to the food court
To get her something to eat

She walks around several times
To decide on her food
Then she finds a place to sit
She doesn't want to seem crude

But why is this seat so cold
She knows what it has to be
She tucked her skirt in her panty hose
For all the world to see!

She loves Walmart
It suits her to a tee
It's the only place
 she wants to be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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