She Loved Horses

An awe of cavernous heartbeats
turned her features equine.

Listening to wind-hollowed chests,
she heard the shape of her life,
the blowing of tubular organs
elongating her face,
into sculptured snorts.

I liked her snagged toothiness. 
the linkage of her broad scapulars,
deeply tooled and studded,
a back ready to be saddled by labor,
hitched to days of hay and manure. 

When she laughed, hooves stomped
 into green rubber
a ponytail swinging from her grey mane.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Michael Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 11:11 AM
A Solid Back...I thought how I might describe a horse, but never attempted...I like what you did...
Ashford Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 11:21 AM
Thanks Arturo, nice of you to comment.
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