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She Looks Ridiculous

She dresses so young! She should dress her age! She looks ridiculous. I scoff at these old biddies. If any of them looked half as good They would be dressed exactly like her. She takes care of herself. She exercises. She eats healthy. She has a slim body, and her skin is impeccable. This is where all the gossiping is coming from. I roll my eyes at their jealousy. She arrives, and they ooh and ahh over her.

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Date: 8/24/2022 9:41:00 AM
Well my goodness. Not only are they jealous, but they're also hypocrites... the worse kind of crappy people. Love this one, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/24/2022 9:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Jenna
Date: 8/22/2022 7:22:00 PM
I couldn't have said it better, Caren. Backbiting is such a part of the group experience.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/23/2022 12:32:00 AM
It is crazy!
Date: 8/22/2022 2:14:00 PM
ha! you have described this to at T, caren! love the ending...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/23/2022 12:32:00 AM
Thank you Ilene -it is how it always ends.

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