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She likes him

She sits there ever fidgeting
Her heart beating faster with each glance
The words simply not coming



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 1st place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Sidwell Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 8:58 AM
Great capture of an anxious relatable moment!
Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 12:54 PM
lol ~ thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Robert
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 6:03 PM
oh to be young and uncomfortably in love.
Gauthier Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 6:30 PM
oh ~ you're much braver than me
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 3:15 PM
Hello Lin, That is because she is nerves. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 10:48 AM
Hello Lin, yes it is puppy love. Hugs. /Darlene/
Gauthier Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:19 PM
yes, puppy love ~
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 2:59 PM
Young love :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:18 PM
omg I would hate to be a teenager again ~ especially these days
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