Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

She Lifts Her Veiling

winter nature's prize 
                                      creamy alabaster ice
                                    wears hill queen beauty 

                                   sun's heartfelt soft smile
                                 beams upon her shying face 
                                       she lifts her veiling

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Lenny Gazbowski April 16, 2016 at 4:32 PM Magical imagery BL, second haiku is sweet. Bl Devnath April 16, 2016 at 4:48 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your appreciation. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison April 16, 2016 at 3:39 PM Fabulous lines BL - my favourite is the second haiku the imagery is amazing:-) hugs Jan xx7 Bl Devnath April 16, 2016 at 4:02 PM Thanks for considering the second haiku as your favorite and for 7. Loved always my lovely friend, bl

Poet Destroyer A April 16, 2016 at 2:52 PM beautiful haiku. Of her... BL, you've embraced both with wonderful lines. LINDA Bl Devnath April 16, 2016 at 2:58 PM Many thanks my lovely *friend for your soft touch to this poem giving it a nice credit. Loved always, bl