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She Lifts Her Veiling

winter nature's prize 
                                      creamy alabaster ice
                                    wears hill queen beauty 

                                   sun's heartfelt soft smile
                                 beams upon her shying face 
                                       she lifts her veiling

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/16/2016 4:32:00 PM

Magical imagery BL, second haiku is sweet.

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/16/2016 4:48:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your appreciation. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison

Date: 4/16/2016 3:39:00 PM

Fabulous lines BL - my favourite is the second haiku the imagery is amazing:-) hugs Jan xx7

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/16/2016 4:02:00 PM

Thanks for considering the second haiku as your favorite and for 7. Loved always my lovely friend, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/16/2016 2:52:00 PM

beautiful haiku. Of her... BL, you've embraced both with wonderful lines. LINDA

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/16/2016 2:58:00 PM

Many thanks my lovely *friend for your soft touch to this poem giving it a nice credit. Loved always, bl