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She Leaves Me

Light vanished upon her leaving with the final grip of dusk-- the perfume of asters wisping softly and I am alone, gone into the restless clang from winds booming; a melody which makes noises louder than my roars-- and within the luster of stars, not a tincture eases this heart. Entry for Brian Strand's 480 Contest 14 Aug 2018

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Date: 8/17/2018 6:39:00 AM
This is a quite lovely poem, that becomes more so on subsequent readings-- Congrats, Jajosh!
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Date: 8/17/2018 12:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 8/16/2018 11:24:00 AM
ohh, lovely flow of expressive feeling, jajosh... congrats!
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Date: 8/15/2018 9:50:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Jajosh, congratulations on your fantastic win. Eve~`*
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Date: 8/14/2018 5:13:00 PM
Well if she has left you, why not come and have a dip with me?? It will clear your head Jajosh.
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