She Leaves Me

Light vanished upon her leaving
with the final grip of dusk--
the perfume of asters wisping softly
and I am alone, gone
into the restless clang from winds booming;
a melody which makes noises louder
than my roars--
and within the luster of stars,
not a tincture eases this heart.


Entry for Brian Strand's  480 Contest 
14 Aug 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Carber Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 6:39 AM
This is a quite lovely poem, that becomes more so on subsequent readings-- Congrats, Jajosh!
Gentry Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 12:02 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
Onclaud Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 11:24 AM
ohh, lovely flow of expressive feeling, jajosh... congrats!
Roper Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Beautiful imagery, Jajosh, congratulations on your fantastic win. Eve~`*
Murray Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 5:13 PM
Well if she has left you, why not come and have a dip with me?? It will clear your head Jajosh.
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