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She Lay Beside the Lake

she lay beside the lake framed with blue eyes and golden hair smiling a clear invitation "come to me, let us share" and it was long before she died 5-14-19 Contest:Writing Challenge 2, Lind68868 Sponsor: Dear Heart Theme: A Dream

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Date: 7/2/2019 1:42:00 PM
Hello Larry Bradfield, oh so sad. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/24/2019 7:38:00 PM
That was a very interesting ending and I quite enjoyed it. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 5/24/2019 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert
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Date: 5/21/2019 11:56:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Larry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/21/2019 9:39:00 AM
Larry, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write!
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