Larry Bradfield Poet Verse

She Lay Beside the Lake

she lay beside the lake
framed with blue eyes and golden hair
smiling a clear invitation
"come to me, let us share"
and it was long before she died

5-14-19
Contest:Writing Challenge 2, Lind68868
Sponsor: Dear Heart
Theme: A Dream

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Darlene De Beaulieu July 2, 2019 at 1:42 PM Hello Larry Bradfield, oh so sad. have a nice day my friend.

Andrea Dietrich May 24, 2019 at 7:38 PM That was a very interesting ending and I quite enjoyed it. Congrats for your win.

Robert Lindley May 24, 2019 at 2:48 PM Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert

Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2019 at 11:56 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Larry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France May 21, 2019 at 9:39 AM Larry, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write!