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She Knew I Loved Her

She danced amid layers of mystique; her tiny palms... Cupping these dreams ? Pure this dove; bluetide mirrors An island girl mediterranean, sands soft it's light in ivory pearls Silhouetted shades her gaze a camera's view ? Silk fingertips tracing My love for you ? Aside butterflies kissing red roses; sweet nectars, for two.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/2/2014 3:12:00 AM
Wonderfully written John, congratulations on a very moving piece. Sarai
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Johnny Rhinem
Date: 2/7/2014 3:22:00 PM
Sara, Sara, *:*(*
Date: 2/1/2014 5:09:00 AM
Very very beautifully penned.Love is a difficult word to be lived these days..but dreams and romance are wonderful..Execellent posts.
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Johnny Rhinem
Date: 2/13/2014 10:01:00 AM
Making Love Is Wonderful Too....
Date: 1/31/2014 4:50:00 PM
A tantalising froth of sunny imagery. I particularly enjoyed the *butterflies kissing red roses* and *sweet nectars, for two* Well done. x
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Date: 1/31/2014 11:08:00 AM
beautiful use of language, very moving emotions, your writing is superb
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