She Knew I Loved Her

She danced amid layers of mystique; her tiny palms...
Cupping these dreams ? Pure this dove; bluetide mirrors
An island girl mediterranean, sands soft it's light in ivory pearls
Silhouetted shades her gaze a camera's view ? Silk fingertips tracing
My love for you ? Aside butterflies kissing red roses; sweet nectars, for two.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Virden Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 3:12 AM
Wonderfully written John, congratulations on a very moving piece. Sarai
Rhinem Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 3:22 PM
Sara, Sara, *:*(*
Chircop Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 5:09 AM
Very very beautifully penned.Love is a difficult word to be lived these days..but dreams and romance are wonderful..Execellent posts.
Rhinem Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 10:01 AM
Making Love Is Wonderful Too....
Stephens Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 4:50 PM
A tantalising froth of sunny imagery. I particularly enjoyed the *butterflies kissing red roses* and *sweet nectars, for two* Well done. x
Heckman Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 11:08 AM
beautiful use of language, very moving emotions, your writing is superb
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