She Is the Fire

A heavenly rose She is the fire in my life The Brightest star which I can move close to My thoughts, Love is not just something you take It's got to be given There she was, clothed in black velvet Long brown tresses Flowing scarlet full lips Light brown skin brown eyes The epitome of Cardiac devastation I didn't know how to love her until this Moment in time the midnight hour Her power Destin to Devotion Devour Platinum love potion Desire the notion she is fire She is every extreme I've dreamed A heavenly rose

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/17/2023 10:28:00 AM

Passionate, heartfelt and very expressive... All the things that good poetry should be... Keep up the great writing, my friend!

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 4/17/2023 1:59:00 PM

Greetings Kelly. Thank you. For Your very encouraging compliment. Peace and enjoy VB Rogers blk panther

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/31/2023 11:26:00 AM

Hello Val, I like the line -'Love is not something you take, it got to be given'. this willb3 my fav. Peace. /Da\rlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/31/2023 3:53:00 PM

Hello Val, you are welcome. Peace Val. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 3/31/2023 12:46:00 PM

Hello Darlene, I am thankful for you reading my work. Peace to you friend. Enjoy. VBR black panther