She Is the Complete Package

She is the complete package
Her clothing and her hair are just so
She has a confidence that oozes into the room
Her selfness is contained, calm, and curiously attractive.

I stare at her, wondering when I am going to become her.
Not this lifetime, maybe the next one or the one after that?
She is smart, knowledgeable, and knows what to say.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Allison Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 9:36 AM
i wondered if you were looking in the mirror when you wrote this one Caren - never have doubts my friend you are amazinggggg!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Krutsinger Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 6:02 PM
thank you Jan - thank you! I mean THANK YOU!
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