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She Is the Complete Package

She is the complete package Her clothing and her hair are just so She has a confidence that oozes into the room Her selfness is contained, calm, and curiously attractive. I stare at her, wondering when I am going to become her. Not this lifetime, maybe the next one or the one after that? She is smart, knowledgeable, and knows what to say.

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Date: 7/30/2023 9:36:00 AM
i wondered if you were looking in the mirror when you wrote this one Caren - never have doubts my friend you are amazinggggg!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/31/2023 6:02:00 PM
thank you Jan - thank you! I mean THANK YOU!

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