She Is On Cloud Nine

She is on cloud nine, all is great, and fine.
She is on cloud ten, doing it again.
She is on cloud eleven, heading toward earth heaven.
She fell back to eight, but life is still rather great.
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Watt Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 11:07 AM
I like the way you think... cloud eight is still rather great. Clever and creative, with a splash of fun
Krutsinger Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 7:59 PM
I love a splash of fun John.
Proxenos Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 7:03 AM
Life is great and we should do things and see all, and go where ever we can, because, life is wonderful and great but it is also short - it flies past each second not seen again. Well penned my friend, hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 7:59 PM
It surely is marvelous!
Hankins Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 7:20 PM
(chuckling) I have often wondered where Cloud Nine is and why it has been characterized as a place of unmitigated joy.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 8:03 PM
It is such a crazy concept, and yet we all seem to know of it.
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