She Is Nothing Like the Stars

She Is Nothing Like The Stars

She is nothing like Sirius,
But her eyes are the bluest blue.
Nor is she like Antares
Yet her skin has a warm, soft hue.
Her hair is like the golden Milky Way
Draped across the dark sky,
Unlike all the spectral jewels ever 
Through the telescope spied.
Would she be like the Sun
I could not gravitate to her more
And still be as distant.
Like a wave never greeting the shore,
Her eyes never meeting mine.

She is nothing like the stars, except...
Expressed in time,
Light years away.


Written June, 1976
Any poem ever written NOT for a contest.
Rhyme scheme:   A,B,C,B,D,E,F,E,G,H,I,H,J,K,J,L
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Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 8:14 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. Happy New Year!
Gauthier Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 10:46 PM
Beautiful poem, very well-crafted.
Walker Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 9:48 AM
I JUST LOVE IT!
May Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 8:02 AM
The unattainable love is waiting us in space! Beautiful poem Phil!
Capitano Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 11:56 AM
Thank you May.
Shaw Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 3:00 PM
No wonder you never found her . . . She is far to great to be anything from earth . . . : )
Merryman Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 9:14 PM
A lovely write filled with creative descriptions! Congrats on your win, Phil!
Kimathi Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 3:02 PM
Congrats Phil, for your WIN with this fine piece!! ;-)
Eastman Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 9:51 AM
A very interesting piece... Congratulations on the win!
Woods    Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 12:46 PM
She sounds like an absolute stunner, now if you would be as so kind as to give her telephone number....: ) Beautiful poem Phil
Nyamato Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 10:47 AM
Utterly beautiful
Hamilton Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 10:29 AM
What a beautiful poem, I love poems with celestial references. Reminds me of my black hole of solitude poem maybe you would like it.40 years ago wow you've been writing a long time, thanks for sharing!
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