She Is Nothing Like the Stars

She Is Nothing Like The Stars

She is nothing like Sirius,
But her eyes are the bluest blue.
Nor is she like Antares
Yet her skin has a warm, soft hue.
Her hair is like the golden Milky Way
Draped across the dark sky,
Unlike all the spectral jewels ever 
Through the telescope spied.
Would she be like the Sun
I could not gravitate to her more
And still be as distant.
Like a wave never greeting the shore,
Her eyes never meeting mine.

She is nothing like the stars, except...
Expressed in time,
Light years away.


Written June, 1976
Any poem ever written NOT for a contest.
Rhyme scheme:   A,B,C,B,D,E,F,E,G,H,I,H,J,K,J,L

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/2/2019 8:14:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. Happy New Year!
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Date: 10/9/2017 10:46:00 PM
Beautiful poem, very well-crafted.
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Date: 2/27/2017 9:48:00 AM
I JUST LOVE IT!
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Date: 10/30/2016 8:02:00 AM
The unattainable love is waiting us in space! Beautiful poem Phil!
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Phil Capitano
Date: 10/30/2016 11:56:00 AM
Thank you May.
Date: 7/23/2016 3:00:00 PM
No wonder you never found her . . . She is far to great to be anything from earth . . . : )
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Date: 7/14/2016 9:14:00 PM
A lovely write filled with creative descriptions! Congrats on your win, Phil!
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Date: 7/14/2016 3:02:00 PM
Congrats Phil, for your WIN with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/14/2016 9:51:00 AM
A very interesting piece... Congratulations on the win!
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Date: 6/29/2016 12:46:00 PM
She sounds like an absolute stunner, now if you would be as so kind as to give her telephone number....: ) Beautiful poem Phil
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Date: 6/29/2016 10:47:00 AM
Utterly beautiful
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Date: 6/29/2016 10:29:00 AM
What a beautiful poem, I love poems with celestial references. Reminds me of my black hole of solitude poem maybe you would like it.40 years ago wow you've been writing a long time, thanks for sharing!
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