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When you find someone beautiful in your life but you don't really know who they are as a person.

When first I peered deep into her eyes, My heart was completely besieged, By her colour, her trance, her all in between, Her book I would happily read, So I steadied my ship, parked on a seat, And looked at all that I liked, And gazed at each little feeling of free, Yet her book stayed closed through the night, And when I awoke all I could see was her glow, Her book cover was all I required, Her beautiful free, emotive kiosk, While her page would not open wide, This ravishingly gorgeous beautiful girl, She displayed a beautiful show, But I never opened and read in her book, Who she is I never will know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/17/2019 10:09:00 PM
This is a really cool poem. I like it. A lot. xomo
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/18/2019 7:44:00 AM
That certainly came through. x
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 1/17/2019 11:30:00 PM
Thankyou Maureen, this is about a woman i let slip thru my fingers.
Date: 1/17/2019 9:55:00 PM
May I say that I do believe you missed out, but maybe there will be a slight second chance?
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 1/17/2019 11:29:00 PM
Thanks Caren. Yep, i missed out with this one but she was a while ago. Ive found others but not like her.

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