She Is Doing the Same

Broken before the answer crawls the questions. 
I see.
I hear.
I am blind to loves feelings.
Emotionally raped by hate gathering twigs to replace my heart with thorns.
Fake by day i play real with clay inside the mares of night.
Dull lights beam brightless while my shadow crawls through the cracks In my veins.
   Windows are fitted with mirrors to see the i in me.
Lost to the underworld by ways i am scorned to be torn by Sworn.
Rivers pollute salted solutions by tearing at the walls of my mind.
Useless born to every conclusion.
I am not starring down the barrel of my gun, the gun is calling my name. 
The bullets i hide away, my brain, 
She is doing the same with blame.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 19, 2013 at 1:45 PM
Unic, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda
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May 9, 2013 at 9:53 PM
UniC, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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May 13, 2013 at 3:11 PM
More like vice versa. You are great. Thanks for the support.
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May 9, 2013 at 12:33 PM
Such an emotive and sad poem so exceptionally expressed. Welcome to P/Soup
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May 13, 2013 at 3:09 PM
Thank you. There will be many more. Promise
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