She Is Crazy and Weird

Sheba had that twirly whirly jumpy bumpy personality
That told you she was either a Gemini or on drugs
I am a Gemini, and on drugs, so I recognized her right away

Others steered clear of her, using monikers like 
Crazy, weird, unusual, off-the-chain, strange.
That is why I ran toward her and made her a friend right away

Sheba had grown up in a carnival, learning to read tarot cards
I love tarot cards; I have tried to read them but
They always end up reading me….

I had grown up in a strict clean house with a mother
Who dragged us to church six times a week
And Sheba thought that was charming….

Sheba had a host of people raise her – the fat woman, the thin man,
The mustached woman, the bearded women, lots of women.
She was used to ignoring orders from everyone….

I had grown up with a drill sergeant of a mother 
who expected us to jump hard and fast, 
so I was used to lots of belt whippings…..

Sheba and I had not grown up in the same way at all,
but we clicked immediately, understanding that we had all 
kinds of things in common

Possibly because we are both crazy, weird, unusual, off-the-chain, 
and wonderfully strange.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/18/2020 4:43:00 PM
Caren, off the bat, - this is a poem which should be entered into a national poetry contest. Great, insightful, funny right away, and continued throughout. A lot to say about its wonderful unfold, many comments to come.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/19/2020 9:51:00 PM
Don't be that modest. This is a special poem. I know it runs through your blood, so you don't see the brightness of the shine.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/19/2020 4:24:00 PM
Thank you so much! I have no idea how to do that, but I am enjoying this site and I love showing off my little missives here.
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