She Is Alive

5 -11- 2016

The face of yours: brownish colour that shone like this golden
Neck-lace of yours; so vivid in my eyes I remember
Whenever I look at this chain, memory of yours clog my brain:
Of the love you shown me when you were alive
Alas – I hope no limit to human life: so you could be ever alive
You are dead, but in this heart you are alive ever
As you cherished me when you are alive
Alive will your memory be in this brain.

Note: she was my father's mother. She lived in our town – Iragbiji – in her life era. I did visit her with my parents and my younger sisters and brothers, during the festival. Though most of times me and my brothers and sisters did visit her was during the third term holiday. Granny was pleasant living with, apart from all sort of things she used to buy us; she was used to pampering children. In 2003, she died of breast cancer; she had made hospital a home before she died. She was gradually recovering then, everyone had thought she had overcome death, but all of a sudden, she gave up the ghost.

Callous death took
her
away without
her
goodbye

I didn’t acquire much from her, but this golden neck-lace. Though it is old and has no much value, but one will not know at a glance, for it shines and looks anew all the time. Had my religion allows me to wear neck-lace, I will be wearing it all around.

Death sadness be
yours
granny is a –
live

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/28/2017 3:50:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your sad tale; holding tight to those keepsakes is our way of keeping our loved ones close. Well-written. Regards, John.
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Date: 12/5/2016 8:06:00 PM
Objects that seem worthless to some can be priceless to others when they have love attached to them... This poem is so heartfelt and very moving, A.M. I know that all of us can relate to this... Hold that necklace tight and keep it near you always!
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Date: 11/6/2016 5:39:00 PM
a necklace from a crowned soul that holds a throne in your heart no living being would stop me adoring or wear something of such high value no worldly price in a love that holds reverence deeply excellent pen truly a credit to your gran bless her afolabi
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Date: 11/6/2016 6:52:00 AM
Lovely portrayal of your Grandma.... A lovely necklace to look at and to remember. ..... Seren
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Date: 11/5/2016 2:09:00 PM
The value of a necklace left for you by a loved one who passed on cannot be measured in dollars. It is the price set by your heart that matters, so this necklace is priceless. Beautiful words, Afolabi!
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