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She Is a Star of the Big Top

Razzly dazzly with high pink hair Devours cotton candy high in air Acrobatic Cinematic She swiftly shows up others with her dare. She shines so brightly, there is a glare. Wears outrageous costumes with high flair She doeth enthrall This gorgeous circus moll She is star of the big top to be fair

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P.S. Awtry

Date: 11/9/2021 4:50:00 PM

This is such a fun piece! Something tells me this would be a great painting :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/9/2021 9:14:00 PM

I think so too!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2021 3:34:00 PM

she sounds very colorful. very fun. Just like your poem

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/9/2021 9:15:00 PM

Thank you Andrea - loved your Gypsy Rose Lee costume!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/9/2021 10:02:00 AM

Ah, I have seen so many of these ladies in sparkling costumes. The seem like they are really enjoying what they do. And sometimes I cringe at what they do!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/9/2021 2:07:00 PM

Some really do love it!