She Is a Cougar

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you were sexually charged through all the parties you barged ready to motor with the crowd proud, looking for the well endowed still you danced with all the boys blended into the background noise a cougar in the skin and bones of a young girl well preserved, vanilla with a cherry swirl they never heard your roar little men never do anymore you hid under the vapour of your vodka you hid in the guise of your drama grabbed your willing prey you never did anything halfway kept them all on standby blamed it on a twenty six ounce high you don’t need wings to fly or an excuse to tell a lie you’re dressed like a woman with class but you know you've rolled in the grass with the body of a lady long legs and more you keep a room with a revolving door like a pro you moved to the beat grabbed your sacrificial hunk of meat

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Date: 9/20/2014 6:04:00 PM
Cougars can be brazen...then again...men need to be tougher and not such easy prey, eh? Loved who you wrote this! Hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2014 6:06:00 PM
HOW you wrote this...Silly me!
Date: 9/18/2014 11:41:00 PM
On a serious note, I love how you can take a subject and make it both light and also with a deeper meaning, you have the ability to tell stories we can all relate too! Cheers!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/19/2014 3:05:00 PM
Arthur you know I love your poetry and sense of humor. You honor me with your kind comments.
Date: 9/18/2014 11:39:00 PM
This is amazing! The photo and poem go so well together. This is another great write Maurice, you have style! By the way do you also happen to have her number?
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/19/2014 3:06:00 PM
I sure do, you are too funny.
Date: 9/18/2014 9:43:00 PM
Oh YES, that is quite the woman. It reminds me a little of the one I wrote of in one of my first poems here at Soup: "Her Sustenance." this one ended rather abruptly and I wanted you to say more!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/19/2014 3:14:00 PM
Yeah! I have a sharper and longer version of this poem. I converted it to this too quickly, hoping not to offend. I should of gave it more of my attention. Because of my theater background I tend to assume many voices some controversial. This is not the place for those writes. Thank You for your dead on assessment as always.
Date: 9/18/2014 1:29:00 PM
"This is it, Elizabeth!"I'm just as old as Red Fox and do appreciate a fine woman. This one would give me a coronary. Good stuff, daver
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/19/2014 3:08:00 PM
Thank you daver. I love your poetry. Quite above the cut. It seems to me that you are kind of legendary here.
Date: 9/17/2014 12:48:00 PM
Well Maurice, i'd say guilty as charged... LOL...JK.... LINDA
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/17/2014 2:12:00 PM
where have you been hiding?
Date: 9/17/2014 10:43:00 AM
Some people never feel good in their skin.Many times they use their money,power or beauty (ah I mean botox nd silicone nd all) to ravish their prey.Yes it happens,sadly it does.Deep thoughts penned.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/17/2014 2:15:00 PM
always happy to hear from you, thank you.
Date: 9/17/2014 7:17:00 AM
or perhaps just a pussy cat toying with an unsuspecting mouse...when a guy does it he's a "dirty old man" or if he has money a "sugar daddy". Ah the old double standard. enjoyed this one
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/17/2014 2:26:00 PM
So true. One the few double standards that works in a women's favor. Thank you for dropping in.
Date: 9/17/2014 4:13:00 AM
love the imagery Maurice - is it written from personal experience!! Hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/17/2014 2:56:00 PM
must go have a look:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/17/2014 2:38:00 PM
No not written from experience. I have no idea where it came from just from the tip of my pen. Thank you Jan. I added lines to Cas Tim Jan and Me. I don't know why I did that either.
Date: 9/16/2014 11:06:00 PM
There are women like that - I encountered some when I was younger. Good quality, clever writing here. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/17/2014 2:40:00 PM
Thank you Mathew you are very kind.
Date: 9/16/2014 10:33:00 PM
I hate being treated like meat....but I guess it goes along with being single
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/17/2014 4:38:00 PM
I know this one woman tricked me last friday treated me like a piece of meat. Then two more times on Saturday and four times on Sunday. I hate it when that happens.
Date: 9/16/2014 8:40:00 PM
I like that...dressed with class, ..rolled in the grass..haha clever. I enjoyed this one very much hunny. well done :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/17/2014 4:40:00 PM
Thank you Cas, it was "you know your a snake in the grass" but I thought that was a little harsh.
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