Maurice Yvonne Poet Rhyme

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She Is a Cougar

you were sexually charged
through all the parties you barged
ready to motor with the crowd
proud, looking for the well endowed
still you danced with all the boys
blended into the background noise

a cougar in the skin and bones of a young girl
well preserved, vanilla with a cherry swirl 
they never heard your roar
little men never do anymore
you hid under the vapour of your vodka
you hid in the guise of your drama

grabbed your willing prey 
you never did anything halfway 
kept them all on standby
blamed it on a twenty six ounce high
you don’t need wings to fly
or an excuse to tell a lie

you’re dressed like a woman with class
but you know you've rolled in the grass
with the body of a lady long legs and more
you keep a room with a revolving door
like a pro you moved to the beat
grabbed your sacrificial hunk of meat

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Eileen Manassian September 20, 2014 at 6:04 PM Cougars can be brazen...then again...men need to be tougher and not such easy prey, eh? Loved who you wrote this! Hugs Eileen Manassian September 20, 2014 at 6:06 PM HOW you wrote this...Silly me!

Arthur Vaso September 18, 2014 at 11:41 PM On a serious note, I love how you can take a subject and make it both light and also with a deeper meaning, you have the ability to tell stories we can all relate too! Cheers! Maurice Yvonne September 19, 2014 at 3:05 PM Arthur you know I love your poetry and sense of humor. You honor me with your kind comments.

Arthur Vaso September 18, 2014 at 11:39 PM This is amazing! The photo and poem go so well together. This is another great write Maurice, you have style! By the way do you also happen to have her number? Maurice Yvonne September 19, 2014 at 3:06 PM I sure do, you are too funny.

Andrea Dietrich September 18, 2014 at 9:43 PM Oh YES, that is quite the woman. It reminds me a little of the one I wrote of in one of my first poems here at Soup: "Her Sustenance." this one ended rather abruptly and I wanted you to say more!! Maurice Yvonne September 19, 2014 at 3:14 PM Yeah! I have a sharper and longer version of this poem. I converted it to this too quickly, hoping not to offend. I should of gave it more of my attention. Because of my theater background I tend to assume many voices some controversial. This is not the place for those writes. Thank You for your dead on assessment as always.

Daver Austin September 18, 2014 at 1:29 PM "This is it, Elizabeth!"I'm just as old as Red Fox and do appreciate a fine woman. This one would give me a coronary. Good stuff, daver Maurice Yvonne September 19, 2014 at 3:08 PM Thank you daver. I love your poetry. Quite above the cut. It seems to me that you are kind of legendary here.

Poet Destroyer A September 17, 2014 at 12:48 PM Well Maurice, i'd say guilty as charged... LOL...JK.... LINDA Maurice Yvonne September 17, 2014 at 2:12 PM where have you been hiding?

Charmaine Chircop September 17, 2014 at 10:43 AM Some people never feel good in their skin.Many times they use their money,power or beauty (ah I mean botox nd silicone nd all) to ravish their prey.Yes it happens,sadly it does.Deep thoughts penned. Maurice Yvonne September 17, 2014 at 2:15 PM always happy to hear from you, thank you.

John Lawless September 17, 2014 at 7:17 AM or perhaps just a pussy cat toying with an unsuspecting mouse...when a guy does it he's a "dirty old man" or if he has money a "sugar daddy". Ah the old double standard. enjoyed this one Maurice Yvonne September 17, 2014 at 2:26 PM So true. One the few double standards that works in a women's favor. Thank you for dropping in.

Jan Allison September 17, 2014 at 4:13 AM love the imagery Maurice - is it written from personal experience!! Hugs Jan xxx Jan Allison September 17, 2014 at 2:56 PM must go have a look:-) Hugs Jan xxx Maurice Yvonne September 17, 2014 at 2:38 PM No not written from experience. I have no idea where it came from just from the tip of my pen. Thank you Jan. I added lines to Cas Tim Jan and Me. I don't know why I did that either.

Matthew Anish September 16, 2014 at 11:06 PM There are women like that - I encountered some when I was younger. Good quality, clever writing here. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Maurice Yvonne September 17, 2014 at 2:40 PM Thank you Mathew you are very kind.

Tim Smith September 16, 2014 at 10:33 PM I hate being treated like meat....but I guess it goes along with being single Maurice Yvonne September 17, 2014 at 4:38 PM I know this one woman tricked me last friday treated me like a piece of meat. Then two more times on Saturday and four times on Sunday. I hate it when that happens.

Casarah Nance September 16, 2014 at 8:40 PM I like that...dressed with class, ..rolled in the grass..haha clever. I enjoyed this one very much hunny. well done :) Maurice Yvonne September 17, 2014 at 4:40 PM Thank you Cas, it was "you know your a snake in the grass" but I thought that was a little harsh.