She Heard The Old Man Sing

It was late at night when she heard the old man sing , 2 am when he thought no one would hear . Slow and sweet he sang the songs once sung by a love passed on; beautiful and best enjoyed alone,unaware others are listening at night she will never speak to him about this secret
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Hawksley Avatar
February 12, 2025 at 3:53 PM
"She Heard The Old Man Sing" is a powerful and unsettling poem that explores the dark underbelly of obsession and possessiveness. With a masterful use of language and imagery, you've created a chilling portrait of a disturbed mind.
Agustin Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 4:31 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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