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She Hates Me...A Tragedy...

Ignore me...Why? "You’re a LOSER thats why!" You Hate me, What did I do? "Why else, you are you!" What is that supposed to mean "Figure it out, you’ll never win," I said I was sorry, What more do you want? "You ARE sorry, Pathetic, a Dork and a runt." Is there anything I could do to change your mind? "I want you leave, what are you blind?" Fine then I’ll go, but I want you to know, I’m sorry for the things that I’ve said and I’ve done, I’m sorry for the feelings, the love I didn’t show... And the boy turned away, down the track where they run, And ended his life...with the shot of a gun. And when the girl heard, she uttered not a word, For to miss him, to care, or feel sorrow, well, that would be absurd...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/4/2016 11:41:00 AM
Vincent Tofilau, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**
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Date: 1/27/2016 7:37:00 PM
deep write, LINDA
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Date: 9/9/2015 9:03:00 AM
Vincent, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT
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Book: Shattered Sighs