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She Gave Off That Vibe

She wore a Gothic look on the sands of time Looking a bit maniacal, but this could be the make-up Was she trying for Steampunk or something newer? Something she created for herself? I was curiously curious. Her eyes were more azure than cornflower, but definitely blue. I could see her perched on the arm of Poe’s chair Impatiently waiting for him to write The Raven. She gave off that vibe.

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Date: 3/10/2022 9:44:00 AM
I curiously liked this quite a lot Caren...suggestive and meaningful yet just a bit of mystery and very satisfyingly and competently constructed.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/10/2022 11:57:00 PM
Thank you Leo
Date: 3/10/2022 9:43:00 AM
Yeah, I get a creepy feeling sometimes when I see young girls with the Gothic look. I don't know what attracts them to it, but I'm a "live and let live" sort of person. And I believe "to each his/her own." Hey, I probably appear strange to someone.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/10/2022 11:57:00 PM
We are all strange to somebody
Date: 3/10/2022 9:14:00 AM
this is freakin' magnificent Caren...and those final lines.....hilarious....
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/10/2022 11:57:00 PM
Thank you John

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