She Found Love

Under this tree she finds love

In this love, she finds hate

Whilst in hate,

Along creeps in fate

Hand-in-hand with fate,

Love begins to lose taste

Slips gently again into hate,

Love spreads its' wings too late

Across the fine lines of her face,

Bitterness draws more lines without space

More lines of distrust, hate,

An unwanted race with fate

Swiftly swooped away to look up,

She takes a quick gulp

Her smiles mixes with uncertainties,

Heaven smiles back with pity

Fate pulls away hate,

Love melts on her heart

She slips back under the tree,

Where she found love.

 

                         "THOUGHTS OF A POETESS"

                                    NEOFLOETRY
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 13, 2016 at 8:46 PM
such a deep and beautiful love story... thank you for sharing. SKAT
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January 11, 2014 at 12:58 PM
Great poem, Edwina. Romance is living through your deeply expressed words, enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace
Aleme Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 1:47 PM
Thanks Jiril Clemons. I appreciate your thoughtful comment. I'll sure check your poems out,
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