She Drew the Clouds Apart

She drew the clouds apart
bid me: “Look beyond”
my darkness

exhale a cleansing breath
whisper: “Let it be”

wave an open hand
in silent peace

inhale the unheard cries
of scentless petals
falling

listen to the mantric drone
of honey bees

watch the darkness shift
through thinning veils

ease into the light
that is your own

She drew the clouds apart
so that I might see
my darkness


John G. Lawless
©7/28/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 8:14 PM
John, your poem is captivating in its exquisite nature. A breathtaking beauty, I love every verse, especially the last three to close your amazing write.. Warmest wishes my Bostonian friend.. ~Susan
Blown Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 7:37 PM
a beautiful deep write
Waters Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 7:32 PM
indeed
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