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She dreams of a soldier back from battle having purchased peace with strength and valor attending now to his long missed maiden a wedding and family now to plan
written 19 Aug 2020

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Date: 10/21/2020 7:03:00 AM
Great imagery. Just loved reading this... Cute picture too... Best wishes and a cheerful day.. ~ Ani
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John Watt
Date: 10/21/2020 10:01:00 AM
Thank you for visiting this older poem, Ani! It was for a contest and different pictures were offered, I was charmed by this one and the poem wrote itself!
Date: 8/30/2020 11:40:00 AM
This is a soldier's dream and the dream of those who wait for their return all wrapped up in this marvelous poem! Congratulations on your win, John
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John Watt
Date: 8/31/2020 4:54:00 PM
Thank you for the kind congratulations and thoughtful comment, Sam.
Date: 8/28/2020 2:43:00 AM
Oh wow...John sir.. Outstanding interpretation..:-) You tend to uniquely perceive things.. I enjoyed it.Congratulations on your wonderful win.:-)Have a beautiful day.:-)
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John Watt
Date: 8/28/2020 9:17:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful words, Deepa. It's a poet's quest to be both relateable and unique. Always a challenge to not go too far in either direction. Appreciate your thoughtful comment.
Date: 8/27/2020 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Dreams, Oh yes dreams. A beautiful write/poem. Enjoy your win and day................
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Date: 8/27/2020 3:30:00 PM
Hi Paula, I appreciate your uplifting words. Enjoy your day ~ John
Date: 8/27/2020 9:29:00 AM
GREAT. Congrats John to win on your wonderful poem. Blessing
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John Watt
Date: 8/27/2020 3:21:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha. I'm glad you stopped by.
Date: 8/27/2020 8:59:00 AM
Thank you so much for participating in the contest, John, great imagery and flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/27/2020 3:19:00 PM
Loved your contest, Eve, as I always do. Thank you for sponsoring and so generously placing my poem. Hugs ~ John
Date: 8/22/2020 1:53:00 PM
Love what you did with this form and the picture prompt. I too chose this picture . it is SO beautiful. Maybe dreamers are the ones most drawn to this photo!!
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John Watt
Date: 8/22/2020 9:08:00 PM
I think you're right about dreamers. I remember commenting to you about your Josephine Wall painting, not knowing yet that it was one of Eve's prompts! I really enjoy her painting style.
Date: 8/21/2020 12:57:00 PM
Good story and I hope he never has to go back to battle because men evolve and are willing to share and not fight!! Like ‘ John Lennon’s Imagine! All the best in the contest John!!
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John Watt
Date: 8/21/2020 1:06:00 PM
Thank you, Krish.
Date: 8/20/2020 12:30:00 PM
Oh yes, after such withdrawal ready to get on with life...not just life but marriage, kids, the whole caboodle!
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John Watt
Date: 8/20/2020 1:03:00 PM
Caboodle is such a great word! The whole kitten caboodle! Thank you, Kim
Date: 8/20/2020 9:37:00 AM
A wonderful short love story written with imagination and initiative, a brilliant poem John. So well penned. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/20/2020 9:45:00 AM
Thank you for so many kind reads and comments today, Jennifer! I am feeling very blessed.
Date: 8/19/2020 6:23:00 PM
Awww, pure poetry in motion, this! Blue ribbon awaiting you, sir. Awe and Wonder Gershon
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John Watt
Date: 8/19/2020 6:49:00 PM
Thank you, sir Gershon. Always a treat to hear from you.
Date: 8/19/2020 2:52:00 PM
Beautifully done. A exquisite entry ~ God bless you, dear friend :)
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John Watt
Date: 8/19/2020 6:48:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend. You are always so thoughtful. God bless your day!
Date: 8/19/2020 1:31:00 PM
A nice happy ending John but for many the ending isnt so good Tom
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John Watt
Date: 8/19/2020 2:34:00 PM
True that, Tom. We will keep praying for all war to end ~ John
Date: 8/19/2020 1:29:00 PM
Great one John! :)
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John Watt
Date: 8/19/2020 2:35:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!

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