She Didnt Care

she didn't care
if he loved her
or not

she didn't care
if he knew
there were others

she didn't care
how much he
cried
raged
begged

they found him
at the bottom of the river
she just didn't care
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Makama Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 2:14 PM
Oh dear.. What a lovely piece you have here. Your craft is definitely seasoned with lots of creativity. Great poem.
Mcguire Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 5:02 PM
Thank you Funom for the kind words!
Cunningham Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 12:48 PM
A sad tale that you hear often. Some people just don't care Tom
Mcguire Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 4:30 PM
Its true, many wonderful poems are written about light and love and fun. I like to write about dark things from time to time to put those emotions out there for folks who are suffering too.
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