She Did Love

She did.
She did it.
She did it twice.
She did it twice over.
She did it twice over again...LOVE,
Susan saw something solid.
He had her heart.
Everlasting energy ending eternally.
Dance, daring dazzling dance.
I intend impish interactions.
Dance, daring dazzling dance.
Letting love lightly lead.
Over opera octave o'yeahs.
Very vivacious victory vied.
Everlasting energy ending eternally.

By Susan Mills
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 6:47 AM
so well done!
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 7:06 PM
It felt just like a dance, Susan. Around and around eternally. Luv, Andrea
Devonshire Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 2:57 PM
What a delight to read, Susan. Like the way she saw something special in this man. And the alliteration is amazing! Great work. Love, Caroln
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