She Cried 2

She cried because her insides had been torn into two.

 She wanted it and she couldn't front that she didn't but it made her change in so many 
ways.

This time it would change her for the rest of her life. She regretted it for a second 
until it was over, You could see it on her face a look of pain and depression. 

Oh we know oh we know if we didn't we wouldn't be true friends.

 She didn't even eat, she stared at us and watched as we noticed the little signs that 
told us something was the matter. 

I could close my eyes and invision just what she was going to say, she wasn't the 
pure girl I once knew and I was even afraid to ask her about it.

 Got caught up in a moment in time and clothes came off and before it ended she was no 
longer a good girl.

 I smiled and laughed at her all together, proud and sad and shocked just like 
a mother. 

But what was inside I will never know will she be ok? Will she ever be 
whole again? I feel it and I know that she will be alright she has the support of a 
thousand soilders that will rap that blanket tight.

 But sometimes I wonder if it's ending soon we all lose it some day but why did it have 
to be now? Why did it have to be so soon?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005


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