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She Comes

She
comes
with the
wind that awakes
from the morning
sun
Stroking
Your
face like
a cold running
river, over stone
flecks
of
pristine crystal
Upon
your lashes
reflect
a Brilliant
kaleidoscope
of colours before you 
creating pure
perfection
dance inside
the brilliance,
revel in her
mystery
slide into her
cleansing aura
Lose
yourself
within her
majestic grace
while sorrow falls
away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/11/2024 11:47:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 11:06:00 PM
CRYSTLA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/21/2014 8:28:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 8/21/2014 8:27:00 PM
Crystal, a beautifully written verse. I enjoyed "She Comes!" Verlena
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