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She Comes

She comes with the wind that awakes from the morning sun Stroking Your face like a cold running river, over stone flecks of pristine crystal Upon your lashes reflect a Brilliant kaleidoscope of colours before you creating pure perfection dance inside the brilliance, revel in her mystery slide into her cleansing aura Lose yourself within her majestic grace while sorrow falls away.

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Date: 4/11/2024 11:47:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 11:06:00 PM
CRYSTLA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/21/2014 8:28:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 8/21/2014 8:27:00 PM
Crystal, a beautifully written verse. I enjoyed "She Comes!" Verlena
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