She Came From the Sea

she came from the sea
a determined wanderer

he stood on shore
rooted to earth

she washed over him
filled with highs and lows

his legs were thick trees
unmoving, solid
his chest withstood all
remaining staunch and firm

his immobility angered this female
she attacked him with fury

the depths of his understanding
held him emotionally sound
as her torrent broke over him
scattering in fragments at his feet

covered in her muck
he stooped down
lifting the woman safely
  above all turbulence

he cleansed them both in ocean waves
carrying her the whole way

when clean
he righted her
stood back
asking if he could do anything else

she asked for forgiveness
turning for home

he caught an arm gently
inviting her to stay

so began the story
of two opposites cleaving
    one to the other
night and day, moon and sun
for the rest of their lives
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Goff Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 6:13 AM
So cool!
Mcconnell Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 11:20 AM
Lovely penning Susan, with really good imagery and flow. Take care and blessings, Gordon
Szoke Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 11:39 AM
Thanks so much, Gordon!
Maverick Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 9:41 AM
Hi Susan, yes the reality despite the hype and Fervour often misguided I have experienced Really enjoyed..'
Szoke Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 11:45 AM
Thanks so much for your thoughtful evaluation.
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