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Offering sanctuary, a soulful sea summons me. And whispering soothing sounds promises to set me free. Cascading breakers mimic the applause of clapping hands. And escorted by the wind, She draws me to her shifting sands. Reproaching insanity, I turn my back on the sea. And start to admonish Her for the way She beckons me. Death awaits me the moment I acquiesce to Her plea. But amidst my tears and pain, She speaks of tranquility. (Quatrain) 10/7/2015

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Date: 5/25/2018 8:29:00 PM
Love it, Emile. The turmoil is fascinating.
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Date: 5/26/2018 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/8/2015 8:54:00 AM
Excellently done Sir.
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Date: 10/8/2015 9:07:00 AM
Thanks Miraj, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 10/8/2015 6:02:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this and how it was constructed....the pain is no more now...an excellent piece indeed.........A.M.
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Date: 10/8/2015 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Afolabi, I appreciate it. Emile.

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