She, Atargatis

Hey you out there I'm here, but I'll sure let you dream All you big boy burly sailors, I'll allure to your unseen Even going back to my ancestors, away back, down Assyria way Our goddess our love, Atargatis, became doomed by your say To escape you, you men, who desired to reap your want Why should she internally repent, to the depths, a Mermaid now sent And now through your aeon of time, perilous events we've now shared If us Mermaids had never have existed, you'd probably say you'd been spared Even through the ages innocent animals have been accused Is it your typical human we, it doesn't matter who's abused Dugongs, Manatee's are beautiful, creatures of whom we've swam Remember, you've never been the elite, ever since we all began Hey, let me say, to your National Ocean Service, what makes you think you know When we've been around so much longer than you, who says we have to show? <*>
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 9/2/2014 10:43:00 AM
anytime...Linda
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:33:00 PM
James, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3
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James Fraser
Date: 8/19/2014 2:17:00 PM
Hiya Linda, thanks kindly. Computers and errors, what a pain - James......
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:34:00 PM
Sorry for the double reply... I got an error... How weird... Linda
Date: 8/17/2014 10:32:00 PM
James, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win!!!
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James Fraser
Date: 8/19/2014 2:06:00 PM
Thank you Robert, much appreciated, James ......
Date: 6/20/2014 12:12:00 PM
forgot to rate the sucker lol sorry...hugs x
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James Fraser
Date: 6/24/2014 2:42:00 PM
Thanks :) x
Date: 6/20/2014 12:12:00 PM
Have you ever read or heard the poem by P.K.Page called planet earth...you really need to big smile....love it James...love Jayne x
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Date: 6/24/2014 2:42:00 PM
Hi Jayne, I've just now listened to 'Planet Earth' by P.K. Page, very good indeed :)
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