She Ask

Are you one of them? 
I heard her say.

Who might one of them be?
He replied, with the one good eye.

She said; you know 
The magic ones. 

That comes from the sky.

He found this girl quite bold.
To ask such an ominous question.

From where the white winter covered
Pine tree limbs that cry out in the cold.

He gave her that look as he cocked his head.
Well, if indeed I was, by now you'd be dead.

She replied as she looked him in his one good eye.
So, I can trust you then, with my deep dark secrets of dread. 




6/4/ 2015  Thursday 4:30 am

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/11/2015 1:50:00 AM
WOW....beautiful pen...:)
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Date: 10/24/2015 9:04:00 PM
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. :)
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Date: 9/15/2015 9:58:00 PM
This neat poem is very surreal and mystical to me, I'm enchanted! Initially, it seems as though she is hopeful to meet another "magic one", yet her closing statement imparts relief, and perhaps she is familiar with the unusual, even dark magic of the sky eyes Debbie. "Pine tree limbs that cry out in the cold..." delicious emotion and sound of imagery...J.A.B.
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Date: 9/6/2015 4:21:00 PM
Debbie, this has the magic and charm that only you can create. It is so straight forward and innocent. Thank you for visiting. I have jet lag and can't stay to long, but you are something special.
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Date: 9/3/2015 12:55:00 PM
Uniquely different work..Very good poetic quality..I enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Date: 9/1/2015 1:18:00 PM
Very mysterious and intriguing! I like this poem very much, Debbie... Wonderful writing!
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Date: 9/1/2015 8:36:00 AM
Excellent. Interesting write. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
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Date: 8/31/2015 2:04:00 PM
this is an intriguing, superb work, debbie.. much enjoyed; huggs
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Date: 8/30/2015 1:13:00 PM
Left me wondering what is going to happen and you left me in suspense. Enjoyed immensely. love phyl
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Date: 8/27/2015 12:08:00 PM
Hi Debbie, WOW,, well that's not going to end well.. On the other hand, he could of lied.... Enjoyed... LINDA
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Date: 8/27/2015 4:35:00 AM
intriguing Debbie!~Olive ELoisa
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Date: 8/26/2015 10:58:00 PM
ooh, so mysterious and interesting to read. I really like it.
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