She

I glance at her Her Mine Not mine Theirs I feel the pull like gravity between us This is where I am meant to be With Her She is toxic We will hurt We will die From this love This love that I cannot lose But with it I am lost If She is my heart My blood My soul My life My reason there is no flat line on the monitor Then why Is She killing me Because I love her More than the Sun loves the Moon The Sun and the Moon are forever lost from each other But they enter the same sky And fuel life Without each other But Me without Her Fuels pain Death Hurt It fuels the need for a razor on my skin She completes me She drains me I need Her Or I am gone But with Her I am lost I am hurt I am torn But I am forever stuck Because in the end SHE is the only reason I smile And the only reason I cry.

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Skat A

Date: 4/29/2016 11:21:00 AM

Juliet, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Moon Flower

Date: 4/28/2016 8:58:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Juliet.:)

Juliet Levin
Date: 4/28/2016 10:52:00 AM

thank you very much

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/27/2016 11:16:00 PM

Hi Juliet, Nice & amazing first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs

Juliet Levin
Date: 4/27/2016 11:22:00 PM

thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2016 10:16:00 PM

Juliet,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Juliet Levin
Date: 4/27/2016 11:22:00 PM

thank you.